Feedback:
Make the straw move around and bend. At the moment it’s very static. Try changing its shape and bring the straw to life, spin it around, bend it etc.
Watch “The dot and the line”
Show more about how the straw is hurting animals. For example, a straw sticking in the turtles eye or have straws and plastic appearing in the turtle and it bulging. Straws coming out of their mouth.
Don’t go too cartooney
Can try drawing storyboard smaller.
Focus on the affect on the animals and expand material. maybe cut out a few of the first scenes that are irrelevant
Maybe the video can be about how the straw hurts different animals such as dolphins, birds